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I was thinking about writing you a letter today
To express every word I thought I should say
but, then I crumpled it up and threw it away
because I just had this feeling
this feeling that you just don't care
anymore, anymore, because you're willing to lie to me
just because you know me too well

Deep down inside
I know you won't lie
but you think it makes me happy
Well a lot of things you say is bullshit

What I wrote in that letter
I figured I should let you know
Why I made the mistakes that I made
You have no idea how cowardly I am
I care just a little too much

I am lost
I am confused
I am miserable
Without you?

As long as you're happy
That's all that really matters
That's not the way things work
No, that's not the way it works

If you were just willing to wait
For the reasons you do not think

It's a little too late
©2007-2009 ~likewoahitsmoe
:iconlikewoahitsmoe:

Author's Comments

I guess it was just tempting to make it rhyme.

It might be a song .. a rap? haha.

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:iconthedarktsutsuku:
its a lil rough here, the 2nd stanza seems somewhat out of place. if it isnt rhyming naturally you shouldn't try to force it unless its doing so everywhere else, it works better that way

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